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A friend of yours has helped you to get the results in an exam. Write a letter to thank him

A friend of yours has helped you to get the results in an exam. Write a letter to thank him 96jEj

Dear Quran, I am writing in reply to thank you for helping me get a high mark in Maths exam last week. I know that you are very busy in preparing for the exam. Therefore I am so grateful when you took time to teach me how to do difficult exercises. Thanks to you I can understand the lesson clearly and quickly. Also I’d better widen my knowledge and be more confident to deal with some challenging questions. If it goes on like this, I will improve significantly my skills. I am able to offer you to Café if you don’t mind. When you have difficulty in something, let’s call me so I will help you as much as possible. It’s better as long as you can help me in one day. Thank you so much. Kind regards, Tram

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get
 a high mark in Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
 exam ‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last week
. I know that you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy in preparing for the exam. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 grateful when you took time to teach me how to do difficult exercises. Thanks to Consider adding a comma here.you,
you
 I can understand the lesson clearly
 and quickly
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 I’d better widen my knowledge and be more confident to deal with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 challenging questions. If it goes on like this, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
significantly
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. I am able to offer you to Café if you don’t mind. When you have difficulty in something, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
’s call me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you as much as possible. It’s better Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 long as you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in one day. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much. Kind regards, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphTram.Tram!Tram?Tram:Tram,Tram;
Tram

IELTS letter A friend of yours has helped you to get the results in an exam. Write a letter to thank him

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

138 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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