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Dear Mr. Rogers, I would like to express my interest in a Refrigeration and Air Conditioning Mechanic

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Dear Mr. Rogers, I would like to express my interest in a Refrigeration and Air Conditioning Mechanic vacancy. I found the job offer extremely interesting to me. Firstly, I have experience in this industry for around 20 years. Secondly, I have a Seaman’s Identification Card and I have built a sailboat with my own hands. Therefore, the job fits my expectations of being a perfect one. As for my experience, I can install, maintain and repair Refrigeration and Air Conditioning equipment varying from residential to industrial ones. Now I have been working in Canada, but originally I am from Ukraine. I have experience working in different companies as a Refrigeration Technician and an HVAC Engineer. I am a hard-working and easily trained employee. Unfortunately, I do not have White Card, Australian Driver’s License, and RHL, but I have Ukrainian and Canadian Driver’s Licenses. I hope that I can get all of them in Australia. I would be happy to become a part of your team. I am enclosing my CV to this email. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Oleksandr Pereverziev
Dear Mr. Rogers,

I would like to express my interest in a Refrigeration and Air Conditioning Mechanic vacancy. I found the job offer
The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".
extremely interesting
to me.
Firstly
, I have experience in this industry for around 20 years.
Secondly
, I have a Seaman’s Identification Card and I have built a sailboat with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
hands.
Therefore
, the job fits my expectations of being a perfect one.

As for my experience, I can install, maintain and repair Refrigeration and Air Conditioning equipment varying from residential to industrial ones.
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Now
I have been working in Canada,
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but
originally
I am from Ukraine. I have experience working in
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different
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companies
as a Refrigeration Technician and an HVAC Engineer. I am a
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hard
-working and
easily
trained employee.

Unfortunately, I do not have White Card, Australian Driver’s License, and
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RHL
,
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but
I have Ukrainian and Canadian Driver’s Licenses. I hope that I can
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get
all of them in Australia.

I would be happy to become a part of your team.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am enclosing my CV to this email.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Oleksandr
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Pereverziev
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IELTS letter Dear Mr. Rogers, I would like to express my interest in a Refrigeration and Air Conditioning Mechanic

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  American English
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183 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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