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Daily life. All day Bsusnsjsosg

Daily life. All day Bsusnsjsosg Jwpoj
My name is Wahyu Hamidah, you can call me Ami. I wake up at 4: 30 am. At 05: 00 am I make a cup of tea and iron my clothes. I have a shower and get dressed. I wear shirt and long pants. Afterwords I have my breakfast and then I prepare my stuff and get ready for work. I work at Avia Bakery, start from 7: 00 am until 2: 00 pm, only weekday. At 11: 00 am I take my lunch break and have a small talk with my friends. At arround 12: 00 pm I continue my job until 2: 00 pm. Afterwords I'm getting ready to go my dorm. Back to dorm for sleep or just chilling. Sometime I cleaning my room. At 4: 00 pm I go to coffee shop for the next my jobs. This coffee shop closed at 9: 00 pm. This second jobs is everyday. Being so busy with all this jobs but must be enjoy the process. My dream are make store for ingredient baking, and built a house in Bali. Another plan I want to reach my goals in college. Nothing, special plan for this week but this is me with busy activiti to reach all my dreams.
My name is
Wahyu
Hamidah
, you can call me
Ami
. I wake up at 4: 30 am. At 05: 00 am I
make
a cup of tea and iron my clothes. I have a shower and
get
dressed. I wear shirt and long pants. Afterwords I have my breakfast and then I prepare my stuff and
get
ready for work. I work at
Avia
Bakery,
start
from 7: 00 am until 2: 00 pm,
only
weekday.

At 11: 00 am I take my lunch break and have a
small
talk with my friends. At
arround
12: 00 pm I continue my
job
until 2: 00 pm. Afterwords I'm getting ready to go my dorm. Back to dorm for sleep or
just
chilling. Sometime
I cleaning
my room. At 4: 00 pm I go to coffee shop for the
next
my
jobs
. This coffee shop closed at 9: 00 pm. This second
jobs
is
everyday
. Being
so
busy with all this
jobs
but
must
be
enjoy
the process. My dream are
make
store for ingredient baking, and built a
house
in Bali. Another plan I want to reach my goals in college. Nothing, special plan for this week
but
this is me with busy
activiti
to reach all my dreams.
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IELTS letter Daily life. All day Bsusnsjsosg

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
209 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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