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My name is Wahyu Hamidah, you can call me Ami. I wake up at 4: 30 am. At 05: 00 am I make a cup of tea and iron my clothes. I have a shower and get dressed. I wear shirt and long pants. Afterwords I have my breakfast and then I prepare my stuff and get ready for work. I work at Avia Bakery, start from 7: 00 am until 2: 00 pm, only weekday. At 11: 00 am I take my lunch break and have a small talk with my friends. At arround 12: 00 pm I continue my job until 2: 00 pm. Afterwords I'm getting ready to go my dorm. Back to dorm for sleep or just chilling. Sometime I cleaning my room. At 4: 00 pm I go to coffee shop for the next my jobs. This coffee shop closed at 9: 00 pm. This second jobs is everyday. Being so busy with all this jobs but must be enjoy the process. My dream are make store for ingredient baking, and built a house in Bali. Another plan I want to reach my goals in college. Nothing, special plan for this week but this is me with busy activiti to reach all my dreams.

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Wahyu
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Hamidah
, you can call me Possible spelling mistake found.AMIAmAmidAmpAMXPMI
Ami
. I wake up at 4: 30 am. At 05: 00 am I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a cup of tea and iron my clothes. I have a shower and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 dressed. I wear shirt and long pants. Afterwords I have my breakfast and then I prepare my stuff and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 ready for work. I work at Possible spelling mistake found.ViaAsiaAvidAriaAvianAva
Avia
 Bakery, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 from 7: 00 am until 2: 00 pm, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 weekday.

At 11: 00 am I take my lunch break and have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 talk with my friends. At Possible spelling mistake found.aroundaground
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 12: 00 pm I continue my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 until 2: 00 pm. Afterwords I'm getting ready to go my dorm. Back to dorm for sleep or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 chilling. Sometime Did you mean "I'm cleaning", "I am cleaning", or "I was cleaning"?I'm cleaningI am cleaningI was cleaning
I cleaning
 my room. At 4: 00 pm I go to coffee shop for the next
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
. This coffee shop closed at 9: 00 pm. This second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 is 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
. Being This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 busy with all this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
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but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be Consider using the past participle "enjoyed"?enjoyed
enjoy
 the process. My dream are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 store for ingredient baking, and built a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in Bali. Another plan I want to reach my goals in college. Nothing, special plan for this week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this is me with busy Possible spelling mistake found.activity
activiti
 to reach all my dreams. 