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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task, as you need a good 40 minutes for task 2. There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: • describe the problems • explain how these problems are affecting you and others • suggest what could be done about it Write at least 150 words.

, as you need a good 40 minutes for task 2. There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: • describe the problems • explain how these problems are affecting you and others • suggest what could be done about it w93q
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Maria Anthony and I am a loyal customer for your esteemed company “Best-Transportation”. I regularly take Bus number 4 heading to Hills Street to reach my work. However, and during the last three rides, the bus was arriving 5 minutes late from the time mentioned on your brochure. This delay prevented me from arriving to work on time and caused my boss to feel upset. In addition to that, it has been noticed that the new appointed driver Mr. Sam is not abiding to the road speed limit and thus putting the passenger’s life into danger. Yesterday and on our way back to Santa Monica, a standing passenger bumped his head into the pole located in the center of the bus when Mr. Sam suddenly hit the brakes while he was exceeding the speed limit. Having said that, I believe that you will advise the morning driver to leave the company earlier in order to reach his destination on time. Moreover, I’m confident that Mr. Sam will be given a warning for his irresponsible driving. Thank you for taking my claim seriously. Yours faithfully, Maria Anthony
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Maria
Anthony and
I am a loyal customer for your esteemed
company
“Best-Transportation”. I
regularly
take Bus number 4 heading to Hills Street to reach my work.

However
, and during the last three rides, the bus was arriving 5 minutes late from the time mentioned on your brochure. This delay
prevented
me from arriving to work on time and caused my boss to feel upset.
In addition
to that, it has
been noticed
that the new appointed driver Mr. Sam is not abiding to the road speed limit and
thus
putting the passenger’s life into
danger
. Yesterday and on our way back to Santa Monica, a standing passenger bumped his head into the pole located in the center of the bus when Mr. Sam
suddenly
hit the brakes while he was exceeding the speed limit.

Having said that, I believe that you will advise the morning driver to
leave
the
company
earlier in order to reach his destination on time.
Moreover
, I’m confident that Mr. Sam will be
given
a warning for his irresponsible driving.

Thank you for taking my claim
seriously
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Maria Anthony
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IELTS letter , as you need a good 40 minutes for task 2. There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: • describe the problems • explain how these problems are affecting you and others • suggest what could be done about it

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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