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An Australian colleague is going to your country for a conference. He/She will spend several days in your home town and has written a letter to you asking for advice about things to see and do there. Write a letter to the colleague suggesting what he/she should see and do while he/she is in your hometown.

An Australian colleague is going to your country for a conference. He/She will spend several days in your home town and has written a letter to you asking for advice about things to see and do there. Write a letter to the colleague suggesting what he/she should see and do while he/she is in your hometown. Xqarq
Hope you are doing greatI received your letter and thanks for choosing to stay several days in my home town after your official work. It is my pleasure to offer my advise to your trip to Qatar. Doha is one of the safety and wealthiest country in the world. Apart from this, there are other dimensions to explore here. I recommend you to visit historical building museum in corniche, World class shopping mall, Multiplex cinema theatre, International standard Football stadiums, Different types of Beach. Lots of multicultural cuisines serves better in my hometown. Example, Karak chai, Arabic Bread with BBQ, shawarma are more famous in the city. Many streetfoods are recognized by well known Youtuber and you should not miss this opportunity. As you know this country is Islamic cultural, Hence, wear proper clothes in the sopping malls and Beach. Especially in Ramadan and Bakrid people used to follow fasting. During the period, you cannot eat food from outside and take away is possible. Moreover, Winter will start on November onwards, bring the warm clothes which helps you to feel good. If not available also no problem. Most of the branded showrooms are available here and its cheaper compare to Australia. You can purchase Ornaments like gold for your family which is really worth able compare to the res of the universe. If require more details, please ping me in WhatsApp and see you soon.
Hope you are doing
greatI
received your letter and thanks for choosing to stay several days in my home town after your official work. It is my pleasure to offer my
advise
to your trip to Qatar. Doha is one of the safety and wealthiest country in the world. Apart from this, there are other dimensions to explore here. I recommend you to visit historical building museum in
corniche
, World
class
shopping mall, Multiplex cinema
theatre
, International standard Football stadiums,
Different
types of Beach. Lots of multicultural cuisines serves better in my hometown. Example,
Karak
chai, Arabic Bread with BBQ,
shawarma
are more
famous
in the city.
Many
streetfoods
are recognized
by well known
Youtuber
and you should not miss this opportunity. As you know this country is Islamic cultural,
Hence
, wear proper clothes in the sopping malls and Beach.
Especially
in Ramadan and
Bakrid
people
used
to follow fasting. During the period, you cannot eat food from outside and take away is possible.
Moreover
, Winter will
start
on November onwards, bring the warm clothes which
helps
you to feel
good
.
If
not available
also
no problem. Most of the branded showrooms are available here and its cheaper compare to Australia. You can
purchase
Ornaments like gold for your family which is
really
worth able compare to the res of the universe. If require more
details
,
please
ping me in WhatsApp and
see
you
soon
.
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IELTS letter An Australian colleague is going to your country for a conference. He/She will spend several days in your home town and has written a letter to you asking for advice about things to see and do there. Write a letter to the colleague suggesting what he/she should see and do while he/she is in your hometown.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
235 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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