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a friend has agreed to look after your pet and house. write a letter to your friend

a friend has agreed to look after your pet and house. write a letter to your friend 3bkQN
Dear Carolyn, Thank you for agreeing to house-sit for me. If you need to contact me during my holiday, I’ll be staying at the Imperial Hotel in Bundaberg. If it’s urgent, however, please ring my mobile phone, which I’ll keep with me at all times. I’ve written the numbers on a sticky note which I’ve left on the fridge. My cat needs to be fed twice daily so each morning and evening put a handful of cat biscuits in his dish. You will find these in the kitchen pantry. Also, please check throughout the day to make sure he has fresh water. You can give him a small bowl of milk in the evening. I would like you to water my plants, too. The indoor ones in the lounge only need water once every few days but the plants on the balcony need to be watered daily unless there has been heavy rain. Finally, for security, please clear my mail box every day and keep the outside lights on at night. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Yours, Katie
Dear Carolyn,

Thank you for agreeing to
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house
-sit for me. If you
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need
to contact me during my holiday,

I’ll be staying at the Imperial Hotel in Bundaberg. If it’s urgent,
however
,
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please
ring my

mobile phone, which I’ll
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keep
with me at all times. I’ve written the numbers on a sticky

note which I’ve
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left
on the fridge.

My cat
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needs
to
be fed
twice daily
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so
each morning and evening put a handful of cat

biscuits in his dish. You will find these in the kitchen pantry.
Also
,
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please
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check


throughout the day to
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make
sure he has fresh water. You can give him a
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small
bowl of

milk in the evening.

I would like you to water my plants, too. The indoor ones in the lounge
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only
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need
water

once every few days
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but
the plants on the balcony
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need
to
be watered
daily unless there

has been heavy rain.
Finally
, for security,
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please
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clear
my mail box every day and
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keep


the outside lights on at night.

I look forward to seeing you on my return.

Yours,

Katie
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IELTS letter a friend has agreed to look after your pet and house. write a letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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