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You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people t celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbor. In your letter: Explain what will be happening Offer your apologies in advance Invite him to join the celebration.

You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people t celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbor. In your letter: Explain what will be happening Offer your apologies in advance Invite him to join the celebration. 7w8b
Dear Mr. Kulligowski, I am writing this letter regarding hosting a celebration with friends and family next sunday. it will at my residence. Let me explain my situation, the purpose the event is to celebrate my graduation. All my close family members and friend will be there, More than 25 people will be at the party. It could get loud and may involve some dancing on music, More over we will have a dinner together. It might get really late. I wanted to inform you about such uncomfortable situation in advance. I sincerely apologize to you in the light of the fact being my neighbor all the music and laugh and talking could be annoying so I hope you understand that all of it is for spending the happiest moment with my loved ones. More over you are invited to the party on Sunday. It will be starting at 7 pm. I would love share this moment of joy with you too. I await a positive response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. your sincerely siddharth bakshi
Dear Mr.
Kulligowski
,

I am writing this letter regarding hosting a celebration with friends and family
next
sunday
.
it
will at my residence.
Let
me
explain
my situation, the purpose the
event
is to celebrate my graduation. All my close family members and friend will be there, More than 25
people
will be at the party. It could
get
loud and may involve
some
dancing on music, More over we will
have a dinner
together. It might
get
really
late. I wanted to inform you about such uncomfortable situation in advance.

I
sincerely
apologize to you in the light of the fact being my neighbor all the music and laugh and talking could be annoying
so
I hope you understand that all of it is for spending the happiest moment with my
loved
ones.

More over you
are invited
to the party on Sunday. It will be starting at 7 pm. I would
love
share this moment of joy with you too. I await a
positive
response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

your
sincerely
siddharth
bakshi
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IELTS letter You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people t celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbor. In your letter: Explain what will be happening Offer your apologies in advance Invite him to join the celebration.

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