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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course. jp1a

Dear my manager, I am writing this letter with regarding a participation training course that I have read it in website. This course is about all sophisticate levels of c# and Microsoft sql server. I have looked at this training course subjects in the website, I had surprised because there are some most important subjects including: object oriented concept, working with files, connection to database, definition of data type. It is believe that some skills, such as data gathering and data mining will be very important for companies that they want make more money in data science until ten years to come. Under this circumstance I also estimate our company can be one of them. Because we have had studies about it before, so it can properly be new way to make profit and money for this firm. There are several problems around it and need your support. For example, course price is too expensive for me to pay and place of venue is in LA, I will be able to solve other problems if you guide me for these by myself. I will waiting for your response, and thanks a lot for your supportations. Best wishes, Saeed

Dear my manager,

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 profit and money for this firm.

There are several problems around it and need your support. For example
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 price is too expensive for me to pay and place of venue is in LA, I will be able to solve other problems if you guide me for these by myself.

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 for your response, and thanks a lot for your Possible spelling mistake found.deportationsimportationssupplicationssuppositionssuppurationsuperstations
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.

Best wishes,

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