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Write a letter to your friend to tell your friend about the meal that you liked in last party.

Write a letter to your friend to tell your friend about the meal that you liked in last party. 0lWRG
Dear sandeep, Last saturday, i went to my sister's home as she invited me on her daughter's birthday party. It was also a get together. My husband and i both went there. Everything was organized very well. Music, lightning, decoration and specially meals planned properly. Surprisingly, meal was prepared by my sister. Only family members were there. Many dishes were presented in front of guests like yogurt, rice, cheese chilli, mushroom and delicious cake. The dish i like most is cheese chilli. That was not much spicy and not heavy. It was prepared by natural spice and homemade ingredients. This dish was giving me taste of my mother's hand that i missed alot after demise. Even husband liked it too. I thanked my sister and got back to home after giving presents to my niece.
Dear
sandeep
, Last
saturday
,
i
went to my sister's home as she invited me on her daughter's birthday party. It was
also
a
get
together. My husband and i both went there. Everything
was organized
very
well. Music, lightning, decoration and
specially
meals planned
properly
.
Surprisingly
, meal
was prepared
by my sister.
Only
family members were there.
Many
dishes
were presented
in front of guests like yogurt, rice, cheese
chilli
, mushroom and delicious cake. The dish
i
like most is cheese
chilli
. That was not much spicy and not heavy. It
was prepared
by natural spice and homemade ingredients. This dish was giving me taste of my mother's hand that
i
missed
alot
after demise. Even husband liked it too. I thanked my sister and
got
back to home after giving presents to my niece.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to tell your friend about the meal that you liked in last party.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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