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A letter to editor, who wrote some thing wrong about your town

A letter to editor, who wrote some thing wrong about your town 7pErA
Dear Sir, I have just read an article about my home town in your newspaper. My name is Punita Desai. I have been living in Mehsana since 2001. You wrote that the city is situated in the most West part of country but actually it is located in the East part. Secondly, you mention that Mehsana ruled by mughals before 100 years but again it was false information. Sir, it is my humble request to you to please correct above two false information regarding my city and you will have to published an article with proper information. I will also send some useful materials about my city with this letter for your refrence, so please use it. I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding this matter. Yours faithfully, Punita Desai
Dear Sir,

I have
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read an article about my home town in your newspaper. My name is
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Punita
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Desai
. I have been living in
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Mehsana
since 2001. You wrote that the city
is situated
in the most West part of country
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actually it
is located
in the East part.
Secondly
, you mention that
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Mehsana
ruled by
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mughals
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before
100 years
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again it was false information.

Sir, it is my humble request to you to
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please
correct above two false information regarding my city and you will have
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to published
an article with proper information. I will
also
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send
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useful materials about my city with this letter for your
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refrence
,
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I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
regarding this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Punita
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Desai
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IELTS letter A letter to editor, who wrote some thing wrong about your town

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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