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a letter about replying about fitness euipment

a letter about replying about fitness euipment PMae2

Dear Ms Croft I would like to thank you for your enquiry of 14 May in which you asked about our fitness equipment. I can confirm that only the highest-quality materials are used in all our equipment, which is reflected in our 5-year guarantee. I am pleasure to send to you our catalogue and a price list. Please note that all prices are quoted CIF London. Our prices are highly competitive, due to small profit margins, thus I apologize that we cannot offer credit terms. We do, however, offer a 5% quantity discount off net prices on orders over €5, 000. Once again we would like to thank you for your writing. We would welcome any further questions you might have. Yours sincerely Birgit Lange

Dear Ms Croft

I would like to thank you for your Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiry' is British English.inquiry
enquiry
 of 14 May in which you asked about our fitness equipment.

I can confirm that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the highest-quality materials are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in all our equipment, which is reflected
 in our 5-year guarantee.

I am pleasure to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 to you our Possible spelling mistake. 'catalogue' is British English.catalog
catalogue
 and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
 list. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 note that all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
prices
are quoted
 CIF London.

Our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
prices
 are highly
 competitive, due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 profit margins, thus
 I apologize that we cannot offer credit terms. We do, however
, offer a 5% quantity discount off net You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
prices
 on orders over €5, 000.

Once again we would like to thank you for your writing. We would welcome any further
 questions you might have.

Yours sincerely


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