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a letter about replying about fitness euipment

a letter about replying about fitness euipment PMae2
Dear Ms Croft I would like to thank you for your enquiry of 14 May in which you asked about our fitness equipment. I can confirm that only the highest-quality materials are used in all our equipment, which is reflected in our 5-year guarantee. I am pleasure to send to you our catalogue and a price list. Please note that all prices are quoted CIF London. Our prices are highly competitive, due to small profit margins, thus I apologize that we cannot offer credit terms. We do, however, offer a 5% quantity discount off net prices on orders over €5, 000. Once again we would like to thank you for your writing. We would welcome any further questions you might have. Yours sincerely Birgit Lange
Dear Ms Croft

I would like to thank you for your
enquiry
of 14 May in which you asked about our fitness equipment.

I can confirm that
only
the highest-quality materials are
used
in all our equipment, which
is reflected
in our 5-year guarantee.

I am pleasure to
send
to you our
catalogue
and a
price
list.
Please
note that all
prices
are quoted
CIF London.

Our
prices
are
highly
competitive, due to
small
profit margins,
thus
I apologize that we cannot offer credit terms. We do,
however
, offer a 5% quantity discount off net
prices
on orders over €5, 000.

Once again we would like to thank you for your writing. We would welcome any
further
questions you might have.

Yours
sincerely


Birgit
Lange
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IELTS letter a letter about replying about fitness euipment

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
124 words
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