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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Karthik Hyderabad is the beautiful city in india and the most interesting part in my city is to live in the hi-tech centre these is the area i pefer to you live because most of the software companies are in this area solely and also all the food shoops and super markets are near to you and also house rents also are in maderate rate only no need to worrry. Hyderabad has well connected public transport you can vist any area by metro within minutes and metro cost also very cheap and bus are also available but in the bus it will take hours to reach particular distanation consequently i perfer you to travel by metro. In Hyderabad meeting is extremely easy because in the public parks you can meet new friends and public are open only morning and evening and also by visiting to the shopping malls you can make new friends. Further more, pubs and cinema theatre is common place to everyone by visiting their you can understand easily. I'm looking forwarding to meet you, Thankingyou, Mahesh. K.
Dear
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Karthik


Hyderabad is the
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beautiful
city in
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india
and the most interesting part in my city is to
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live
in the hi-tech
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centre
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these is
the area i
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pefer
to you
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live
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because
most of the software
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companies
are in this area
solely
and
also
all the
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food shoops
and super markets are near to you and
also
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house
rents
also
are in
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maderate
rate
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only
no need to
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worrry
.

Hyderabad has
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well connected
public transport you can
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vist
any area by metro within minutes and metro cost
also
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very
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cheap
and bus are
also
available
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but
in the bus it will take hours to reach particular
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distanation
consequently
i
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perfer
you to travel by metro.

In Hyderabad meeting is
extremely
easy
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because
in the public parks you can
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meet
new friends and public are open
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only
morning and evening and
also
by visiting to the shopping malls you can
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make
new friends.
Further
more, pubs and cinema
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theatre
is common place to everyone by visiting their you can understand
easily
.

I'm looking forwarding to
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meet
you,

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Thankingyou
,

Mahesh. K.
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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