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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. 7Bd5
I hope you are doing great. I am writing in response to the complaint I received from you yesterday regarding the noise from my flat. I would like to apologise for any inconvenience that caused to you. With regards to the noise, it was created by the celebration of my grandmother's 50th birthday. We wanted to make the occasion really special to commemorate our grandmother's golden birthday. We invited some close friends and relatives at the party and the gathering must have created the noise. The music was also a bit louder and we realised very late that it might disturb the neighborhood. In such parties, I would ensure in future that the music is kept as low as possible. Once again, I would like to ask for an apology. Thanks a lot for your understanding.
I hope you are doing great. I am writing in response to the complaint I received from you yesterday regarding the noise from my flat.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for any inconvenience that caused to you.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
the noise, it
was created
by the celebration of my grandmother's 50th birthday. We wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the occasion
really
special to commemorate our grandmother's golden birthday.

We invited
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
close friends and relatives at the party and the gathering
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have created the noise. The music was
also
a bit
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
louder and
we
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
late that it might disturb the neighborhood.

In such parties, I would ensure in future that the music is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
as low as possible.

Once again, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
an apology.

Thanks a lot for your understanding.

IELTS essay Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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