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Your friend had made a plane to se movie together you cannot now not join him. you have found another friend .

Your friend had made a plane to se movie together you cannot now not join him. you have found another friend. bQK0Q
In the coming couple of weeks my important interview due to the fact I will not be catching film. Consequently, I advise you, please you might be going to them with Tom. Also, I was interested to see movie on the contrary my interview will come. Although I have some time to prepare for my job interview, I would achieve my life goal. Another reason is that it is a multinational company and give me high pay. Its international brand is “Maruti”. Even though, they are giving me one chance to that if I will clear then I will be working as an Engineer (design and product development) in the industry. In this industry lot of opportunity for my carrier and they will be provide free of cost accommodation with three times meal. Right now, the time is very precious for me. Nonetheless, I will advise, you can go with Harry. He is good personality person and talkative friendly. You know last week I you and he were enjoying a lot when we were going to a trip. There we lived in hotel Ramada in single room, did hiking, saw snowfall, and did lot of things. However, Harry helped you when you climbed the mountain and slipped on it. They also health-conscious person always eat healthy which is plus point for you. So, all in all he is very good and healthy person with extra personality and you both will go to mall and see movie and enjoy them. I miss.
In the coming couple of weeks my
important
interview due to the fact I will not be catching film.
Consequently
, I advise you,
please
you might be going to them with Tom.

Also
, I
was interested
to
see
movie
on the contrary
my interview will
come
. Although I have
some
time to prepare for my job interview, I would achieve my life goal. Another reason is that it is a multinational
company
and give me high pay. Its international brand is “
Maruti
”.
Even though
, they are giving me one chance to that if I will
clear
then I will be working as an Engineer (design and product development) in the industry. In this industry lot of opportunity for my
carrier and
they will be
provide
free of cost accommodation with three times meal.

Right
now
, the time is
very
precious for me. Nonetheless, I will advise, you can
go with
Harry. He is
good
personality person and talkative friendly. You know last week I you and he were enjoying a lot when we were
going to a trip
. There we
lived
in hotel Ramada in single room,
did hiking
,
saw
snowfall, and did
lot of
things.
However
, Harry
helped
you when you climbed the mountain and slipped on it. They
also
health-conscious person always eat healthy which is plus point for you.

So
, all in all he is
very
good
and healthy person with extra personality and you both will go to mall and
see
movie and enjoy them. I miss.
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IELTS essay Your friend had made a plane to se movie together you cannot now not join him. you have found another friend.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
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