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Young people hukumat serious crime should be punished in the same way as adults

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As, we live in contemporary era, where crime is increasing day by day. Youngsters commit crime at peak level. Juvenile so commit serious crime should be sentence in same way as adults. I agree to some extent with the above statement my view point will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are numerous reasons to endorse the notion committee Kenny g is illegal whether it is done by an youngster or any adult punishment would be same for both. First and foremost not paying proper attention on their children. Parents have hectic schedules. There always busy in their work. Moreover, they have not enough time to teach their children about not involve in crimes. Young people join evil companies where they learn about peak pocketing and shoplifting. They must be punished for this minor crimes because if they get punishment for crime they will be aware for next time. However, when this type of activity is done by an adult. They get sentenced. They have to pay money for sometime send to prison. whereas, pupils get leniency just waned not to do this again which is further very dangerous because they motivated to commit other crimes in future such as model kidnapping and many more. On the other hand, grown up who commit crime should not be punished in a way as adults because they have no knowledge about what is right or wrong for them. Mostly, they get influenced by TV serials. They want to aware people related crimes but adolescence consider them their role modals and get effect from TV shows. Government should organised awareness camp to enlightened youth. In spite of this grown ups are easy to imitate their mind. If we get same punishment as adult. It will negatively affect a future because sometime crime which is opened by children is minor but they get very serious punishment. Despite of this, they sent to Juvenile court where they can learn about not to commit any minor or major crime. Juvenile court give proper education to teenagers To cite and example, according to recent survey conducted by government it was revealed that more than 70% of grammar made by youngsters because they have not enough knowledge therefore they are involved in committing crimes youngsters are more involved in crimes than adults. To Conclude, it is easy to reach that every coin have two faces youngsters are not enough knowledge that is reason why they commit crimes act and the parents do not teach them both adults and youngsters get same punishment for crimes because everyone is equal before the law. As, we live in contemporary era, where crime is increasing day by day. Youngsters commit crime at peak level. Juvenile so commit serious crime should be sentence in same way as adults. I agree to some extent with the above statement my view point will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are numerous reasons to endorse the notion committee Kenny g is illegal whether it is done by an youngster or any adult punishment would be same for both. First and foremost not paying proper attention on their children. Parents have hectic schedules. There always busy in their work. Moreover, they have not enough time to teach their children about not involve in crimes. Young people join evil companies where they learn about peak pocketing and shoplifting. They must be punished for this minor crimes because if they get punishment for crime they will be aware for next time. However, when this type of activity is done by an adult. They get sentenced. They have to pay money for sometime send to prison. whereas, pupils get leniency just waned not to do this again which is further very dangerous because they motivated to commit other crimes in future such as model kidnapping and many more. On the other hand, grown up who commit crime should not be punished in a way as adults because they have no knowledge about what is right or wrong for them. Mostly, they get influenced by TV serials. They want to aware people related crimes but adolescence consider them their role modals and get effect from TV shows. Government should organised awareness camp to enlightened youth. In spite of this grown ups are easy to imitate their mind. If we get same punishment as adult. It will negatively affect a future because sometime crime which is opened by children is minor but they get very serious punishment. Despite of this, they sent to Juvenile court where they can learn about not to commit any minor or major crime. Juvenile court give proper education to teenagers To cite and example, according to recent survey conducted by government it was revealed that more than 70% of grammar made by youngsters because they have not enough knowledge therefore they are involved in committing crimes youngsters are more involved in crimes than adults. To Conclude, it is easy to reach that every coin have two faces youngsters are not enough knowledge that is reason why they commit crimes act and the parents do not teach them both adults and youngsters get same punishment for crimes because everyone is equal before the law.
As, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in contemporary era, where
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crime
is increasing day by day. Youngsters
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peak
level.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Juvenile
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so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
serious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
should be
Did you mean "sentenced"?
sentence
in same way as
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adults
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extent with the above statement my view point will
be discussed
in the upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are numerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
to endorse the notion committee Kenny g is illegal whether it
is done
by
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
youngster
or any adult
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
would be same for both.
First
and foremost not paying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
proper
attention on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Parents
have hectic schedules. There always busy in their work.
Moreover
, they have not
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enough
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time
to
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teach
their
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children
about not involve in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
. Young
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people
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join
evil
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
where they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
about
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peak
pocketing and shoplifting. They
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must
be
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punished
for this
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minor
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crimes
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because
if they
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get
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punishment
for
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crime
they will be
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aware
for
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
However
, when this type of activity
is done
by an adult. They
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get
sentenced. They
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay money for
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sometime
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
to prison.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
whereas
, pupils
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get
leniency
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just
waned not to do this again which is
further
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very
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dangerous
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because
they motivated to
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commit
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other
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crimes
in
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future
such as model kidnapping and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more.

On the
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other
hand, grown up who
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commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
should not be
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punished
in a way as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have no
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knowledge
about what is right or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
for them.
Mostly
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
influenced by TV serials. They want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
aware
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
related
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
adolescence consider them their role modals and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
effect from TV
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
.
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Government
should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "organise"
organised
awareness camp to enlightened youth.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
this
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
grown ups
are
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easy
to imitate their mind. If we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
as adult. It will
negatively
affect a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometime
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
which
is opened
by
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children
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
minor
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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serious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
.
Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
Despite of
this, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to
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Juvenile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
court
where they can
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learn
about not to
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commit
any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
minor
or major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Juvenile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
court
give
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
proper
education to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
To cite and example, according to recent survey conducted by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
it
was revealed
that more than 70% of grammar made by youngsters
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
therefore
they
are involved
in committing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
youngsters are more involved in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
than adults.

To Conclude
, it is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
easy
to reach that every coin have two faces youngsters are not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
that is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reason
why they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
act and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teach
them both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
and youngsters
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
everyone is equal
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the law.

As, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in contemporary era, where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
is increasing day by day. Youngsters
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peak
level.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Juvenile
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
serious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
should be
Did you mean "sentenced"?
sentence
in same way as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extent with the above statement my view point will
be discussed
in the upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are numerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
to endorse the notion committee Kenny g is illegal whether it
is done
by
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
youngster
or any adult
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
would be same for both.
First
and foremost not paying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
proper
attention on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Parents
have hectic schedules. There always busy in their work.
Moreover
, they have not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teach
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
about not involve in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
. Young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
evil
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
where they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peak
pocketing and shoplifting. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punished
for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
minor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
if they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
they will be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
aware
for
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
However
, when this type of activity
is done
by an adult. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
sentenced. They
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay money for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometime
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
to prison.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
whereas
, pupils
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
leniency
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
waned not to do this again which is
further
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they motivated to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
such as model kidnapping and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, grown up who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
should not be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punished
in a way as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
about what is right or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
for them.
Mostly
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
influenced by TV serials. They want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
aware
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
related
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
adolescence consider them their role modals and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
effect from TV
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "organise"
organised
awareness camp to enlightened youth.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
this
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
grown ups
are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
easy
to imitate their mind. If we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
as adult. It will
negatively
affect a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometime
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
which
is opened
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
minor
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
serious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
.
Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
Despite of
this, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Juvenile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
court
where they can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
about not to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
minor
or major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crime
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Juvenile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
court
give
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
proper
education to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
To cite and example, according to recent survey conducted by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
it
was revealed
that more than 70% of grammar made by youngsters
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
therefore
they
are involved
in committing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
youngsters are more involved in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
than adults.

To Conclude
, it is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
easy
to reach that every coin have two faces youngsters are not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
that is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reason
why they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
commit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
act and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teach
them both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
and youngsters
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
punishment
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
everyone is equal
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the law.
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IELTS essay Young people hukumat serious crime should be punished in the same way as adults

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
874 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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