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young people are influence by their friend

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it is clear that there are a number of beneficial aspects for their friends impact to child, however, it also comes with detrimental side. The following paragraphs will outline, in some detail, on both side related to topic. there are a host of beneficial for children are affected by their friendships. Firstly, It can not deny to significance of friends in school. When they face to problems, hard assignment, way to tell something with they fall in love, conflict in their families and other. Most young people choose their friends to recommend more than their parents. Although, there are a few beneficial for friends effective, some detrimental can be identified. When some people who they call friends are bad guys, consequence are different. they are influenced to terrible things In conclusion, not only does friends provide benefit to young people, but also it can easily to negative aspects, If you make friends who are good people, you will be a good person.
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IELTS essay young people are influence by their friend

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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