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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?You will not learn much about life if you are always comfortable.

You will not learn much about life if you are always comfortable. pRbgy
Our life encompasses a wide spectrum of both desirable and unpleasant events and emotions. Therefore we are facing contradictory happenings during our life as an unavoidable fact. Although being always in a good situation of welfare can help us to achieve our goals, the fact of experiencing difficult situations to become ready for the reality of life should not be disregarded. The following assay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view. Undoubtedly, some decent factors such as being wealthy and the state of being healthy are fundamental for reaching our ambitions in life. . .
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encompasses a wide spectrum of both desirable and unpleasant
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events
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Therefore
we are facing contradictory happenings during our
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life
as an unavoidable fact. Although being always in a
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good
situation of welfare can
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help
us to achieve our goals, the fact of experiencing difficult situations to become ready for the reality of
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life
should not
be disregarded
. The following assay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view.

Undoubtedly
,
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some
decent factors such as being wealthy and the state of being healthy are fundamental for reaching our ambitions in
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life
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IELTS essay You will not learn much about life if you are always comfortable.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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