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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?You should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. aw7Y9
That the newspaper is a vital source of information nowadays is an undeniable fact. Newspaper plays an important role in our lives. By reading newspaper, businesspersons lead their business in accordance to changes, politicians make important decisions about the country, and people find a job. There are two distinct schools of thought about newspapers: Some people argue that we should not trust whatever the newspaper says; others disagree. From my vantage point, I am after the opinion that we should not believe everything that we read in the newspaper for the following significant reasons. To begin with, newspaper is a business. Looking at it as a whole, some individuals work for a company that publishes newspaper regularly with intend to earn money and make a living. Hence, their sole purpose is to make more profit, no matter what. Indeed, there is a very high possibility that the reporters share misleading and inaccurate information in order to attract more people and sell more newspaper. The veracity of this claim can be evaluated through a meticulous observation on the mass of examples; my mother usually reads The National Iranian Newspaper, and she accidentally found two distinct statements. In one issue of the newspaper, the Land Ministry declared a sharp rise in the prices of lands in one region; however, in the next issue, she found the exact opposite. This clearly illustrates the fact that information in newspaper might be changed due to public’s interest intending to sell more newspaper. Besides the above-mentioned reason, newspaper can be open to abuse. In order not to overgeneralize what was alluded to, this is a catastrophic incident in third world countries such as Iran, as far as I know, that government officials in high political positions hire agents to manipulate the data in the newspaper on behalf of them or their line of reasoning. Moreover, some of them institute their private newspaper company to publish misleading articles with aim to brainwash individuals. Indeed, in many societies, the question of how reliable the information presented in the newspaper is has become a contentious issue of debate among the insightful researchers and psychologists and caused quite a stir in numerous circles and camps. In the final glance, among the most predominant reasons in support of this issue, censorship could be the next choice worth citing here for further discussion. Unquestionably, censorship is an indispensable part of each country’s policy. Governments do not allow the secrets and crucial information of a country to be published. Consequently, the information in the newspaper might be entirely right. All in all, although some sophisticated persons may prove the otherwise, I still assert that one should not completely rely on the information in the newspaper. Due to the convincing arguments in the body paragraphs, I approve the author’s statement.
That the
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is a vital source of
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information
nowadays is an undeniable fact.
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Newspaper
plays an
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important
role in our
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lives
. By reading
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newspaper
, businesspersons lead their business in accordance to
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changes
, politicians
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make
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important
decisions about the
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country
, and
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people
find a job. There are two distinct schools of
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thought
about
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newspapers
:
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Some
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people
argue that we should not trust whatever the
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newspaper
says; others disagree. From my vantage point, I am after the opinion that we should not believe everything that we read in the
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newspaper
for the following significant reasons.

To
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begin
with,
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newspaper
is a business. Looking at it as a whole,
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some
individuals work for a
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company
that publishes
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newspaper
regularly
with intend to earn money and
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make
a living.
Hence
, their sole purpose is to
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make
more profit, no matter what.
Indeed
, there is a
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very
high possibility that the reporters share misleading and inaccurate
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information
in order to attract more
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people
and sell more
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newspaper
. The veracity of this claim can
be evaluated
through a meticulous observation on the mass of examples; my mother
usually
reads The National Iranian
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Newspaper
, and she
accidentally
found two distinct statements. In one
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issue
of the
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newspaper
, the Land Ministry declared a sharp rise in the prices of lands in one region;
however
, in the
next
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issue
, she found the exact opposite. This
clearly
illustrates the fact that
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information
in
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newspaper
might be
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changed
due to public’s interest intending to sell more newspaper.

Besides
the above-mentioned reason,
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newspaper
can be open to abuse. In order not to overgeneralize what
was alluded
to, this is a catastrophic incident in third world
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countries
such as Iran, as far as I know, that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
officials in high political positions hire agents to manipulate the data in the
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newspaper
on behalf of them or their line of reasoning.
Moreover
,
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some
of them institute their private
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newspaper
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to publish misleading articles with aim to brainwash individuals.
Indeed
, in
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many
societies, the question of how reliable the
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information
presented in the
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newspaper
is has become a contentious
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issue
of debate among the insightful researchers and psychologists and caused quite a stir in numerous circles and camps.

In the final glance, among the most predominant reasons in support of this
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issue
, censorship could be the
next
choice worth citing here for
further
discussion.
Unquestionably
, censorship is an indispensable part of each
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country’s
policy.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Governments
do not
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allow
the secrets and crucial
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information
of a
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country
to
be published
.
Consequently
, the
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information
in the
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newspaper
might be
entirely
right.

All in all, although
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some
sophisticated persons may prove the
otherwise
, I
still
assert that one should not completely rely on the
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information
in the
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newspaper
. Due to the convincing arguments in the body paragraphs, I approve the author’s statement.
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IELTS essay You should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
466 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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