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You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly

You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly E3Vax
I want to express my strong dissatisfaction with the servise which was repaired my car resently. When I used to drive car for the first time properly it worked and the voice was not anymore. Also, when I come back home, it seemed lound strange voice while the car is driven. However, it smelled gaz whole the cabin. Even though I had turned another street, my car stopped to continue its function. As a consequence, I felt nervous at that time and helping machine came to your service office. I hope that your services rerepaired my car or I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention
I want to express my strong dissatisfaction with the
servise
which
was repaired
my
car
resently
. When I
used
to drive
car
for the
first
time
properly
it worked and the voice was not anymore.
Also
, when I
come
back home, it seemed
lound
strange voice while the
car
is driven
.
However
, it smelled
gaz
whole the cabin.
Even though
I had turned another street, my
car
stopped
to continue its function. As a consequence, I felt nervous at that time and helping machine came to your service office. I hope that your services
rerepaired
my
car
or I trust this matter will receive your immediate
attention
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IELTS essay You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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