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You only stop worrying about money when we have a lot of it

You only stop worrying about money when we have a lot of it 0nR19
So far, I have bought an electric kettle, which makes my life much more convenient. An electric kettle is an electrical appliance having a self-contained heating unit for heating water and automatically switches off when the water reaches a boiling point or at a preset temperature below 100 °C. Due to its function, it has become an indispensable machine in my house. I can brew tea, make a cup of coffee or boil some water in just a few minutes. Moreover, I used to ignore it when waiting for the water to boil, which may cause unexpected accidents. Therefore, an automatic kettle also guarantees my safety as well as my family’s. However, it has some restrictions. It is utilized only to make water hot, so we can not put other things in it. Another disadvantage is that it is difficult to clean its inside due to its small cover. In conclusion, apart from some bad points, every household should possess one electric kettle
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an electric
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, which
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my life much more convenient. An electric
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kettle
is an electrical appliance having a self-contained heating unit for heating
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water
and
automatically
switches off when the
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reaches a boiling point or at a preset temperature below 100 °C. Due to its function, it has become an indispensable machine in my
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house
. I can brew tea,
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a cup of coffee or boil
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water
in
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a few minutes.
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, I
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it when waiting for the
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to boil, which may cause unexpected accidents.
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, an automatic
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also
guarantees my safety
as well
as my family’s.
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, it has
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restrictions. It
is utilized
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hot,
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we can not put other things in it. Another disadvantage is that it is difficult to clean its inside due to its
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small
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, apart from
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points, every household should possess one electric
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IELTS essay You only stop worrying about money when we have a lot of it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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