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You have had a class discussion on the importance of exercise. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question: Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important? Write your composition.

Nowadays the body shape and the healthy lifestyle are the main preoccupation in our society, everyone dreams to have the perfect body, and to live healthily: men, women and even tennegers. exercising is the key but it's not the only component to be healthy Indeed, exercise is primordial to live longer and to avoid a lot of health problems, but it is not the only way, healthy food is also important, eating healthy and balanced food is mendatory and it goes by hand with exercising, especially with the curent rhythm of our lives. Various survey demonstrate that regular exercising and a balanced diet help to reduce the risk of cardiovascular diseaces, it decreases the risk of diabeties and other health issues. We cant talk about healthy living without mentioning the mindeset, because mental health is as important as the body health, that why doctors advice always to avoid all sources of stress and I think that meditation is one of the useful trend of this century to relax clear the mind. it is important to mention that alcohol cigarettes and drugs are the enemy of our mental and physical health. to summarize, if you want to lead a healthy lifestyle, sport, healthy food are your adjuvant.
Nowadays the body shape and the
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healthy
lifestyle are the main preoccupation in our society, everyone dreams to have the perfect body, and to
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live
healthily
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men
, women and even
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tennegers
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exercising
is the key
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but
it's not the
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only
component to be
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healthy


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, exercise is primordial to
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live
longer and to avoid
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a lot of
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health
problems,
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it is not the
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only
way,
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food is
also
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, eating
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healthy
and balanced food is
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mendatory and
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especially
with the
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rhythm of our
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lives
. Various survey demonstrate that regular exercising and a balanced diet
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help
to
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reduce
the
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risk
of cardiovascular
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diseaces
, it decreases the
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diabeties
and other
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issues.

We
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talk about
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living without mentioning the
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,
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because
mental
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health
is as
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important
as the body
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health
, that why doctors advice always to avoid all sources of
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stress
and I
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think
that meditation is one of the useful trend of this century to relax
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clear
the mind.

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it
is
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important
to mention that alcohol cigarettes and drugs are the enemy of our mental and physical health.

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to
summarize, if you want to lead a
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lifestyle, sport,
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healthy
food are your adjuvant.
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IELTS essay You have had a class discussion on the importance of exercise. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question: Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important? Write your composition.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
206 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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