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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?You can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear.

You can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear. e58j7
All over the world people wear wide various range of clothes according to their social ranks, ethnic conventions, and personal believes and interests. Therefore, people’s clothing would roughly demonstrate their characteristics and behaviors. Otherwise, people should not be judged by what they wear. The following essay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view. Undoubtedly, several conclusions might seem sensible when we consider and explore what people put up in different occasions. First, when they always wear clean and elegant clothes, it contributes to others’ thin. . .
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IELTS essay You can learn a lot about people by the clothes they wear.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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