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It is easy for family member in present than past

It is easy for family member in present than past OVEQp
family is always play important factor in success of people. Some believe that people were more successful in the past life while other think that people in modern life more successful. I believe that family is more important and effective in today's life and makes easier for the member of the family to be sucessful; I am going to develop my reasons in next paragraphs. First of all, people or family nowadays very much supportive due to develop cognizant. Pshycological knowledge is very prevalent in the social life. Everybody want to respect and try to understand view-point of the family member even if it is strange. With no fear, family member have privilege to say their thought and this help them to illustrate their feelings and more pressure free to act on their goal. but, the things was different in the past; they were bounded with the superstitious custom and tradition. let me tell you my personal story about my father what he wanted to be but what he ended up to. my grand father was very strict and not gave a damn about the others feeling. my fathers always want to be painter but at that time his opinion was feckless on to his family especially grand pa. due to my grand pa adamant and inflexible view about the career, he refused to give sake about my father interest. Consequently, he was ended up what he wanted to be his son. Had the things would be different if he had born in this generation where people care about the others opinion. he may be more successful if he was let to pursue his dream. Thus, flexible conscience in family member makes people life more successful today's than previous. Secondly, high-tech development helps family member to get better access and platform to be successful in their life. modern technology enables the people to get the tool/facility what they want to push their career in the apex point. The same technological innovation may be major drawback in the past to be successful in their life. On the above paragraph I have mentioned that my father wanted to be a painter in his life but ended up with other profession. may be this happened with my grand pa stubborn nature in his view. but, if my father had have a chance to pursue his skills with the technological advancement, he may would pursue his career what he interested in. However, with lack of technology and my grand pa view, he could not get over and stepped up to raise hand to do his things. With respect to past life, I can changed my father's mind to see what I see and do what I fascinated with even my parents support. In this way, technology development blessed this generation to be more successful. In conclusion, family member in this generation are blessed with both technology and widen view of the society. people are free to experiment things and have better chance to be successful due to this privilege.
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family
is always
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play
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important
factor in success of
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people
.
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believe that
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people
were more
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successful
in the
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past
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life
while
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other
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think
that
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people
in modern
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life
more
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successful
. I believe that
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family
is more
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important
and effective in
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today
's
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life
and
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makes
easier for the
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member
of the
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family
to be
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sucessful
; I am going to develop my reasons in
next
paragraphs.

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First of all
,
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people
or
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family
nowadays
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very
much supportive due to develop cognizant.
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Pshycological
knowledge is
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very
prevalent in the social
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life
. Everybody
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want
to respect and try to understand view-point of the
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family
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member
even if it is strange. With no fear,
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family
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member
have privilege to say their
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thought
and this
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help
them to illustrate their feelings and more pressure free to act on their goal.
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but
, the things was
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different
in the
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past
; they
were bounded
with the superstitious custom and tradition.
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let
me
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tell
you my personal story about my
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father
what he wanted to be
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but
what he ended up to. my
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grand
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father
was
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very
strict and not gave a damn about the others feeling.
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my
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fathers
always want to be painter
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but
at that time his opinion was feckless on to his
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family
especially
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grand
pa. due to my
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grand
pa adamant and inflexible
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view
about the career, he refused to give sake about my
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father
interest.
Consequently
, he
was ended
up what he wanted to be his son. Had the things would be
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different
if he had born in this generation where
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people
care about the
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others
opinion.
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he
may be more
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successful
if he was
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let
to pursue his dream.
Thus
, flexible conscience in
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family
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member
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makes
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people
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life
more
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successful
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today
's than previous.

Secondly
, high-tech development
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helps
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family
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member
to
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get
better access and platform to be
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successful
in their
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life
.
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modern
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technology
enables the
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people
to
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get
the tool/facility what they want to push their career in the apex point. The same technological innovation may be major drawback in the
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past
to be
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successful
in their
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life
. On the above paragraph I have mentioned that my
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father
wanted to be a painter in his
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life
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but
ended up with
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other
profession.
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may be
this happened with my
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grand
pa stubborn nature in his
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view
.
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but
, if my
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father
had
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have
a chance to pursue his
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skills
with the technological advancement, he may
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would
pursue his career what he interested in.
However
, with lack of
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technology
and my
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grand
pa
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view
, he could not
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get
over and stepped up to raise hand to do his things. With respect to
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past
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life
, I can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "change"
changed
my father's mind to
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see
what I
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see
and do what I fascinated with even my parents support. In this way,
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technology
development blessed this generation to be more successful.

In conclusion
,
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family
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member
in this generation
are blessed
with both
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technology
and widen
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view
of the society.
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people
are free to experiment things and have better chance to be
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successful
due to this privilege.
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IELTS essay It is easy for family member in present than past

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
505 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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