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You borrowed something from your friend a while ago but it has been damaged somehow.

You borrowed something from your friend a while ago but it has been damaged somehow. VQ76Q

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. The purpose of writing this missive is to remind you about the tripod stand that I borrowed from you last month. As amazon was showing it out of stock at that time. So, you lend it to me during the lockdown. I am feeling really embarrased to tell you that my little 7 year old niece have broken it few days back, while I was busy doing something else. He rotated the part where mobile phone is placed with greater force due to which its ring lost the grip. I told you that I would return it on 10th august 2021. However, now I cannot make it. I have ordered its broken part online and it would reach here on coming saturday. I would handover it to you after repairing it. I feel really sorry for causing this inconvenience as I know you too need it for your classes.

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. The purpose of writing this missive is to remind you about the tripod stand that I borrowed from you last month. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
Possible spelling mistake found.Amazon
amazon
 was showing it out of stock at that time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, you lend it to me during the lockdown.

I am feeling really
Possible spelling mistake found.embarrassed
embarrased
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "7-year"7-year
7 year
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 niece have broken it few days back, while I was busy doing something else. He rotated the part where mobile phone is placed
 with greater force due to which its ring lost the grip.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 you that I would return it on The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
10th august 2021
. However
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it. I have ordered its broken part online and it would reach here on coming Possible spelling mistake found.SaturdaySaturdays
saturday
. I would The word 'handover' is a noun. Did you mean the verb "hand over"?hand over
handover
 it to you after repairing it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 feel really
 sorry for causing this inconvenience as I know you Did you mean "to"?to
too
 need it for your classes. 