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Robinson cruso that i caught

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The flaw of Robinson Crusoe that I caught is Crusoe has a colonists mindset and a little bit of racism. To make that clear, when he saved the boy, he suddenly gives him the western name Man Friday. Crusoe also taught him his religion and his English language. He taught Friday to say ‘master’ before "yes" and "no". Although Friday voluntarily becomes Crusoe’s servant, it can also show his colonist mindset. He calls Friday whenever he describes him by saying "Negroes", which is a pointer of his racist attitude.
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before
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yes
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no
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. Although Friday
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show
his colonist mindset. He calls Friday whenever he
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Negroes
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, which is a pointer of his racist attitude.
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IELTS essay Robinson cruso that i caught

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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