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You are working as a sales manager for a large fashion chain. Recently, sales have been decreasing. Below are some possible solutions

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To improve the above situation, I will combine the methods as follows: the first, the fashion stores run sales-off program to increasing sales and building customer satisfaction. The second, the customers like new styles and hot trends, so we will introduce new deigns follow the trend. The launch products which will be shown the central highlight of the store. Therefore, it will attract more customers and helps the store’ turnover increase. To the above methods to be most effective, the finally we have to advertising on internet as facebook, youtube, Instagram… which have lots of potential customers in there. new designs and sales-off program attracts them to the store. Especially, it also helps we get more new customers.

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 the above situation, I will combine the methods as follows:

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