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You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company they could not find it Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you s v.1

You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company they could not find it Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you s v. 1
Providing homework is a conventional method followed by most teachers at the school around the world. While some group of people thought that it is a negative development if children do their assignment at the school, however, I agree with this view for two reasons. Firstly, it is undeniable that there is certainly some reason behind such task which are given by the invigilator. One of them is to get ready for the exam through daily practices as in classroom teachers are there to make understand children the basic fundamental and the remaining study, they have to do at home in the form of homework which requires calm environment, unlike the school. As a result, they are able to consider well, such topics at home and remember for the whole life. Besides this, children tend to be prepared for term examination without a feeling of any distressed. Another concern in terms of not doing the task at school is awareness. If teenagers do not do a project at home their parents fell to understand the capability of their child and in such cases, it might be possible that children can imitate friend’s assignment at school. Consequently, he will have to be dependent on someone to complete homework every time and this habit can lead to lack of confidence. For instance, a survey conducted by the BBC found that 67% children are not able to build up confidence due to imitation habits and feel lack of pride if homework is not done by themselves. In conclusion, not only do homework make able to get ready children for the exam, but also can boost their confidence. Therefore, I agree with this view that children should complete their homework at home which is a remarkably positive development of their skills.
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homework
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people
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thought
that it is a
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development if
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do their assignment at the
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,
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with this view for two reasons.

Firstly
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some
reason behind such task which are
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given
by the invigilator. One of them is to
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get
ready for the exam through daily practices as in classroom teachers are there to
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make
understand
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children
the basic fundamental and the remaining study, they
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have to
do at home in the form of
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homework
which requires calm environment, unlike the
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school
.
As a result
, they are able to consider well, such topics at home and remember for the whole life.
Besides
this,
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children
tend to
be prepared
for term examination without a feeling of any distressed.

Another concern in terms of not doing the task at
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school
is awareness. If
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teenagers
do not do a project at home their parents fell to understand the capability of their child and in such cases, it might be possible that
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children
can imitate friend’s assignment at
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school
.
Consequently
, he will
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have to
be dependent on someone to complete
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homework
every time and this habit can lead to lack of confidence.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the BBC found that 67%
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children
are not able to build up confidence due to imitation habits and feel lack of pride if
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homework
is not done by themselves.

In conclusion
, not
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do
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homework
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get
ready
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children
for the exam,
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but
also
can boost their confidence.
Therefore
, I
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agree
with this view that
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children
should complete their
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homework
at home which is a
remarkably
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positive
development of their
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skills
.
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IELTS essay You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company they could not find it Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you s v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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