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Writing task 2: With the advent of the internet, increasing numbers of people are shopping online. What issues arise from this and how can they be tackled?

Currently, owing to the development of the internet, online shopping is preferred by numerous individuals. One of the main problem that might causes less physical activity and the most viable solution to this is to educate population about the harmful impacts of this phenomenon. The first and foremost concern caused by increasing demand for online shopping is that may bring about sedentary lifestyle. In other words, nowadays, people do not go to shop to check and buy the merchandises for their needs instead they are staying at home and get all posessions as door delivered.
Currently
, owing to the development of the internet, online shopping
is preferred
by numerous individuals. One of the main problem that might
causes
less physical activity and the most viable solution to this is to educate population about the harmful impacts of this phenomenon.

The
first
and foremost concern caused by increasing demand for online shopping is that may bring about sedentary lifestyle.
In other words
, nowadays,
people
do not go to shop to
check
and
buy
the merchandises for their needs
instead
they are staying at home and
get
all
posessions
as door delivered.
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IELTS essay Writing task 2: With the advent of the internet, increasing numbers of people are shopping online. What issues arise from this and how can they be tackled?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
95 words
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