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Writing task 2: With the advent of the internet, increasing numbers of people are shopping online. What issues arise from this and how can they be tackled?

Currently, owing to the development of the internet, online shopping is preferred by numerous individuals. One of the main problem that might causes less physical activity and the most viable solution to this is to educate population about the harmful impacts of this phenomenon. The first and foremost concern caused by increasing demand for online shopping is that may bring about sedentary lifestyle. In other words, nowadays, people do not go to shop to check and buy the merchandises for their needs instead they are staying at home and get all posessions as door delivered.

Currently
, owing to the development of the internet, online shopping is preferred
 by numerous individuals. One of the main problem that might The modal verb ‘might’ requires the verb’s base form.cause
causes
 less physical activity and the most viable solution to this is to educate population about the harmful impacts of this phenomenon.

The first
 and foremost concern caused by increasing demand for online shopping is that may bring about sedentary lifestyle. In other words
, nowadays, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do not go to shop to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the merchandises for their needs instead
 they are staying at home and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 all Possible spelling mistake found.possessions
posessions
 as door delivered. 