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Writing task 2 about students Who graduated high school should travel or work before starting college another arguments is that they should start college immediately discuss and give opinion

Writing task 2 about students Who graduated high school should travel or work before starting college another arguments is that they should start college immediately discuss and give opinion 3aWm5

For students graduating from high school is the stepping stone to another interesting part of life. Some people argue that student should take time for excursions or indulge into employment before entering into a college life due to the fact that this brings heterogeneity, mature experience and intensity in further activities. While others state that they should instantly start college study to maintain their continue interest in study. In this essay, I will contend both views and provide extra arguments to support former view of activities before college education. There is no doubt that. . .

For students graduating from high school is the stepping stone to another interesting part of life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 argue that student should take time for excursions or indulge into employment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 entering into a college life due to the fact that this brings heterogeneity, mature experience and intensity in further
 activities. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 others state that they should instantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 college study to maintain their continue interest in study. In this essay, I will contend both views and provide extra arguments to support former view of activities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 college education.

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IELTS essay Writing task 2 about students Who graduated high school should travel or work before starting college another arguments is that they should start college immediately discuss and give opinion

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

96 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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