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Some people says cars should be banned in large cities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people says cars should be banned in large cities. VBP7Q

From a decade, the use of cars is growing remarkably. Some people argue that cars should no longer be allowed to use especially in big cities. Although, this is totally a one side controversial solution, in this essay I will contend to restrict the use of cars in metropolitan areas due to the fact that this way of commuting raises various environmental, traffic and other problems. There is no doubt that today society is facing various pollution, traffic hazards and road accident problems. Firstly, according to the statistics, urban areas are suffering from various pollution issues. For exam. . .

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IELTS essay Some people says cars should be banned in large cities.

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

100 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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