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Some people says cars should be banned in large cities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people says cars should be banned in large cities. VBP7Q
From a decade, the use of cars is growing remarkably. Some people argue that cars should no longer be allowed to use especially in big cities. Although, this is totally a one side controversial solution, in this essay I will contend to restrict the use of cars in metropolitan areas due to the fact that this way of commuting raises various environmental, traffic and other problems. There is no doubt that today society is facing various pollution, traffic hazards and road accident problems. Firstly, according to the statistics, urban areas are suffering from various pollution issues. For exam. . .
From a decade, the
use
of cars is growing
remarkably
.
Some
people
argue that cars should no longer be
allowed
to
use
especially
in
big
cities. Although, this is
totally
a one side controversial solution, in this essay I will contend to restrict the
use
of cars in metropolitan areas due to the fact that this way of commuting raises various environmental, traffic and other problems.

There is no doubt that
today
society is facing various pollution, traffic hazards and road accident problems.
Firstly
, according to the statistics, urban areas are suffering from various pollution issues. For exam.
.
.
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IELTS essay Some people says cars should be banned in large cities.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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