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In the previous post, we got an idea about Session 1 and Session 2 trainers. We are conducting this online camp with skilled trainers like them. Let us introduce you to the trainers for the next two sessions. The third session name is "Fundamentals of First Aid” and you all gonna happy to hear that the trainer of this session is none other than honourable Mohammad Iqbal Hossain Patwary. You may know about the basic knowledge of First Aid, but you don't know the advanced level knowledge of First Aid. He will tell you about First Aid, how a scout can improve a patient through first aid, Can a scout is a doctor because of knowing First Aid and lots more.
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IELTS essay Writing content about sessions. . . . . . . . . . . . .

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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