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The local newspaper in your area is planning to publish a series of articles called Technology that has changed our lives. Each article is about a different piece of technology that has had an impact on the world. You decide to write an article for the newspaper about the mobile phone. In your article, discuss both the positive and negative aspects of mobile phones.

The local newspaper in your area is planning to publish a series of articles called Technology that has changed our lives. Each article is about a different piece of technology that has had an impact on the world. You decide to write an article for the newspaper about the mobile phone. In your article, leDaw

With the advancement of technology, we can easily try to do whatever we would like to now. The mobile phone, to give an example, represents one of the most symbolic items in this modern world. However, there are some arguments that the phone can have the negative impact on certain people. Could the mobile phone provide merits or demerits with people? Undeniably, it is essential that people need to know how to use the phone wisely. More people have no longer less social interaction with others lately, when it comes to communication way by using the device too many hours. Moreover, they can spend less active or sedentary lifestyle because it is unnecessary, which could lead much unhealthier lifestyle. In contrast, once people hold the device in their hands they can live a day more efficiently and comfortably. The gadget will firmly enhance not only studying but also working and the few things you have to do can to touch and swipe the screen for about 5 minutes or so. In addition, people can build interactive connection across the world without much effort and contact with their family or friends anytime and anywhere. In conclusion, the attractive item can be useful or useless, depending the way people make use of. Therefore, they have to figure out how to deal with it better.

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. The mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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some
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phone
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negative
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people
. Could the mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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people
? Undeniably
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people
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use
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phone
wisely
. More You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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comes
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many
 hours. Moreover
, they can spend less active or sedentary lifestyle This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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In contrast
, once You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 hold the device in their hands they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a day more efficiently
 and comfortably
. The gadget will firmly
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only
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but
also
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have to
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so
. In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can build interactive connection across the world without much effort and contact with their family or friends anytime and anywhere.

In conclusion
, the attractive item can be useful or useless, The verb 'to depend' requires the preposition '(up)on':  "depending on".depending on
depending
 the way You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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use
 of. Therefore
, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 figure out how to deal with it better. 