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Nowadays, some people still prefer to ride bicycles. To what extent do you think this will help us in today's life?

Nowadays, some people still prefer to ride bicycles. Knak6
Even if the number of people is low to use bicycles than those days, some people are using and riding bicycles. Here, I will write the advantages and disadvantages of using bicycles and eventually, I will give my notion. In modern days, people are using motorbikes, cars and public transports mostly due to a long-time travel, smoothness and time-saving. Before these inventions, everyone has a bicycle, but today, everyone has motorbikes and cars. Besides, there are no bicycles. Bicycles have become old-things to see rarely. So, the usage of bicycles is decreasing these days. In contrast, even though bicycles do not have the facilities like motorbikes and cars. Its cost is very inexpensive. If we ride a bicycle, it will keep our body healthy. Moreover, cycle riding competition are inaugurated like sports, which help to increase the riders. Likewise, cycle riding has been become a passion among the youngsters. Furthermore, we can use bicycles if we go to the near shop or the nearest place. It will help to reduce the cost of buying petrol or diesel for motorbikes or cars. Significantly, bicycles reduce the air pollution, which is needed, nowadays. What is more, some health advisors suggested to ride the bicycles to loss the weigh, and keep healthy. To sum up, although motorbikes and other vehicles make travel easy and smoothness, bicycles help to keep our physics. However, motorbike helps to reach our destination earlier. So, I believe that bicycles cannot provide the advantages like other vehicles, but bicycles is possible to use and ride for healthy, save the cost and stop the pollution.
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bicycles
than those days,
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some
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people
are using and riding
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bicycles
. Here, I will write the advantages and disadvantages of using
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bicycles
and
eventually
, I will give my notion.

In modern days,
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people
are using
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motorbikes
,
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cars
and public transports
mostly
due to a long-time travel, smoothness and time-saving.
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Before
these inventions, everyone has a
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bicycle
,
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but
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today
, everyone has
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motorbikes
and
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cars
.
Besides
, there are no
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bicycles
.
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Bicycles
have become
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old
-things to
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see
rarely.
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So
, the usage of
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bicycles
is decreasing these days.

In contrast
,
even though
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bicycles
do not have the facilities like
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motorbikes
and
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cars
. Its cost is
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very
inexpensive. If we ride a
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bicycle
, it will
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keep
our body healthy.
Moreover
, cycle riding competition
are inaugurated
like sports, which
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help
to increase the riders.
Likewise
, cycle riding has
been become
a passion among the youngsters.

Furthermore
, we can
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use
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bicycles
if we go to the near shop or the nearest place. It will
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help
to
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reduce
the cost of buying petrol or diesel for
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motorbikes
or
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cars
.
Significantly
,
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bicycles
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reduce
the air pollution, which
is needed
, nowadays.
What is more
,
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some
health advisors
The verb 'suggested' is used with the gerund form: "suggested riding".
suggested to ride
the
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bicycles
to loss the weigh, and
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keep
healthy.

To sum up, although
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motorbikes
and other vehicles
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make
travel easy and smoothness,
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bicycles
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help
to
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keep
our physics.
However
,
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motorbike
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helps
to reach our destination earlier.
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So
, I believe that
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bicycles
cannot provide the advantages like other vehicles,
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but
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bicycles
is possible to
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use
and ride for healthy, save the cost and
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stop
the pollution.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, some people still prefer to ride bicycles.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
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