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Writing a paragraphy to talk about music

Writing a paragraphy to talk about music 2xLpX

Music is a necessary part in my life and i always listen to music in my free time wherever. I prefer listening to modern music than listening to traditional music. It may be that i feel it unsuitable for me because i am a dynamical person and i fancy the funny melodies. It will be great when i listen to my favourite music and enjoy the peace sunrise with a cup of tea. I usually listen to music whenever i have some spare tim even in study time, i sometimes listen to baroque music to focus on studying effectively. So, it will be portable to enjoy a sheet music on my smartphone. I think i cannot live without music. It is a part of my life

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