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writing a letter of appreciation

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I thank God for blessing me an excellent, kind, and loving people around me. though I may not be with my biological family he showered me of his abundant love and grace with friends and colleagues whom they consider me as their true blood and family. It is true that blood is stickier than water but what shall we do if blood brothers or sisters are not within your reach. In times of need and crisis, no one could help you nor you can reach to other than someone that is near beside you. Friends, colleagues, and neighbors are always there for you willing to extend help to their best and ability. Having a positive and welcoming attitude to whichever you will encounter in life will reciprocate you the same as what you have sowed.
I thank God for blessing me an excellent, kind, and loving
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people
around me. though I may not be with my biological family he showered me of his abundant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and grace with friends and colleagues whom they consider me as their true blood and family.

It is true that blood is stickier than water
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but
what shall we do if blood brothers or sisters are not within your reach. In times of need and crisis, no one could
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help
you nor you can reach to other than someone
that is
near beside you. Friends, colleagues, and neighbors are always there for you willing to extend
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help
to their best and ability.

Having a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
and welcoming attitude to whichever you will encounter in life will reciprocate you the same as what you have sowed.
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IELTS essay writing a letter of appreciation

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
135 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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