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Write the paragraph about expreience that challenged you or required your courage

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We all have things that take courage to overcome them, and I am no exception. One thing that required me to overcome my fear in order to overcome it was giving a presentation in front of the class when I was in 6th grade. The first thing happen In geography class that day, the teacher assigned us to make PowerPoint to present for the next class. We are very worried because we have never done this before. The whole group discusses and the work is delegated to each member, I am assigned to be the presenter. Since it's my first time making it, I prepared the content and spirit to complete it in the best way And when that presentation came, my anxiety grew. I was even afraid to cry, not daring to give a presentation. But thanks to you guys' encouragement, I became more confident, overcame myself to overcome my fear, and I finally made it. That challenge scared me, but thanks to it, I was more confident in life. The scary thing is not that you meet the challenge, but the scary thing is that you can't overcome it. Be courageous - because it is essential in life for us to be successful

We all have things that take courage to overcome them, and I am no exception. One thing that required me to overcome my fear in order to overcome it was giving a presentation in front of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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 thing happen In geography This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 that day, the teacher assigned us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 PowerPoint to present for the next
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. We are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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because
 we have never done this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
.

The whole group discusses and the work is delegated
 to each member, I am assigned
 to be the presenter. Since it's my first
 time making it, I prepared the content and spirit to complete it in the best way

And when that presentation came, my anxiety grew. I was even afraid to cry, not daring to give a presentation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 thanks to you guys' encouragement, I became more confident, overcame myself to overcome my fear, and I finally
 made it. That challenge scared me, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 thanks to it, I was more confident in life. The scary thing is not that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the challenge, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the scary thing is that you can't overcome it. Be courageous Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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because
 it is essential in life for us to be Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsuccessful.successful!successful?successful:successful,successful;
successful