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Write one paragraph (about 150 words) about solutions.

Write one paragraph (about 150 words) about solutions. PrE9w
There are several solutions that could be applied to tackle the aforementioned problems. The first impossible method is reducing the cost of living by investing money in the building of affordable or social housing and applying policies to stabilize the market. This way could be able to help low-income people and the poors have better living conditions and contribute to preventing the spread of slum areas. Another solution is promoting the use of cleaner public transports by upgrading bus, train, metro systems and introducing lower-ticket prices to encourage people to shift from personal vehicles to public means of transport. Such an action would reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for instance, enact congestion charges for drivers could help curb the traffic problem.
There are several solutions that could
be applied
to tackle the aforementioned problems. The
first
impossible method is reducing the cost of living by investing money in the building of affordable or social housing and applying policies to stabilize the market. This way could be able to
help
low-income
people
and the
poors have
better living conditions and contribute to preventing the spread of slum areas. Another solution is promoting the
use
of cleaner public transports by upgrading bus, train, metro systems and introducing lower-ticket prices to encourage
people
to shift from personal vehicles to public means of transport. Such an action would
reduce
both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London,
for instance
, enact congestion charges for drivers could
help
curb the traffic problem.
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IELTS essay Write one paragraph (about 150 words) about solutions.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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