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Write an introduction for the task: "Why are many university graduates not able to speak English despite many years of learning? What are feasible solutions to this issue?"

Write an introduction for the task: "Why are many university graduates not able to speak English despite many years of learning? What are feasible solutions to this issue? " PLBYX
Currently, many graduates are not able to speak English fluently despite having been trained for 4 years at university. There are several causes relating to this trend and certainly possible solutions to tackle it might be applied. In this essay, I am going to analyze these from a broader perspectiveAs the cause of taking no notice of the class mentioned above, having discussed the explanations for paying no heed to lessons, some proper remedies to solve it could be done. First and foremost, the teacher needs to reset up the lesson to attract more attention from the student by using video, images, or games. It could be the best way to get interested in students and create excitement for them to take part in the lesson. Indeed, teachers should make more opportunities for students to practice in the real world, for instance, in tourism majoring, students should have many fields trip or chemical majoring, it is important to practice in the laboratory. Furthermore, schools should ban students from using technology devices in class and make a punishment. For example, confiscate smartphones or laptops at the end of the class if someone using, or calling their parents to announce the situation. Therefore, schools should make penalties more dramatic to prevent these current state. From what have been discussed above, in conclusion, the problem of ignoring periods in school might stem from some reason but appropriate methods would be done to address this.
Currently
,
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many
graduates are not able to speak English
fluently
despite having
been trained
for 4 years at university. There are several causes relating to this trend and
certainly
possible solutions to tackle it might
be applied
. In this essay, I am going to analyze these from a broader
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perspectiveAs
the cause of taking no notice of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
mentioned above, having discussed the explanations for paying no heed to lessons,
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some
proper remedies to solve it could
be done
.
First
and foremost, the teacher needs to reset up the lesson to attract more attention from the
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student
by using video, images, or games. It could be the best way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
interested in
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students
and create excitement for them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in the lesson.
Indeed
, teachers should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
more opportunities for
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students
to practice in the real world,
for instance
, in tourism majoring,
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students
should have
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many
fields trip or chemical majoring, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to practice in the laboratory.
Furthermore
, schools should ban
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students
from using technology devices in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a punishment.
For example
, confiscate smartphones or laptops at the
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end
of the
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class
if someone
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using
, or calling their parents to announce the situation.
Therefore
, schools should
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make
penalties more dramatic to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
these
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current
state.

From what have
been discussed
above,
in conclusion
, the problem of ignoring periods in school might stem from
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some
reason
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but
appropriate methods would
be done
to address this.
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IELTS essay Write an introduction for the task: "Why are many university graduates not able to speak English despite many years of learning? What are feasible solutions to this issue? "

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
241 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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