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Write an essay on the topic 'Travel'.

Write an essay on the topic 'Travel'. rbnBN
Travelling is the most important part of our society. It takes place in every stream like in businesses and in personal life. We have to travel many places so often to get our work done whether it is related to business or for just hanging out. Peoples in the past used to travel by public transport like railways, buses and auto-rickshaws. But nowadays, almost everyone has a personal vehicle such as car, motorcycles and scooters. Travelling is a common thing for these generation as they like to hang out with friends more often than with family; which lets them meet their generation people and enjoy travelling to different places. Travelling for business needs is also very trendy in these days due to technology. People need to take care of the clients that are out of station due to their wide spread of business. Some people even has a job that let's them shift from one place to another. Travelling plays a vital role for that kinds of people. Travelling is also necessary in the medical stream. Travelling helps people to stay fit and keeps their mind active. It improves knowledge about various types of locations and also the people staying over there. It freshens up the mind that was stressed up due to daily routine. Travelling by means of different ways of transportations increases an experience rate and knowledge regarding the costs and paths. Travelling does not just mean to have a tour for few days but also having a change to our life. Without travelling life will be difficult to handle.
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Travelling
is the most
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important
part of our society. It takes
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place
in every stream like in
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businesses
and in personal life. We
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have to
travel
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many
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places
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so
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often
to
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get
our work done whether it
is related
to
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business
or for
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just
hanging out.
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Peoples
in the past
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used
to travel by public transport like railways, buses and auto-rickshaws.
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But
nowadays, almost everyone has a personal vehicle such as car, motorcycles and scooters.

Travelling is a common thing for
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these generation
as they like to hang out with friends more
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often
than with family; which
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lets
them
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meet
their generation
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people
and enjoy
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travelling
to
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different
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places
.
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Travelling
for
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business
needs is
also
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very
trendy in these days due to technology.
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People
need to take care of the clients that are out of station due to their wide spread of
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business
.
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Some
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people
even has a job that
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let's
them shift from one
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place
to another.
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Travelling
plays a vital role for that kinds of
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people
.

Travelling is
also
necessary in the medical stream.
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Travelling
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helps
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people
to stay fit and
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keeps
their mind active. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
knowledge about various types of locations and
also
the
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people
staying over there. It freshens up the mind that was
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stressed
up due to daily routine.

Travelling by means of
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different
ways of transportations increases an experience rate and knowledge regarding the costs and paths.
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Travelling
does not
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just
mean to have a tour for few days
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but
also
having a
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change
to our life.

Without
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travelling
life will be difficult to handle.
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IELTS essay Write an essay on the topic 'Travel'.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
262 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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