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Many people preferred to be self employed

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In the modern era, many individuals want to become a self employed rather than working as a employee in other organisations. This essay will discuss reason behind self employed and some drawbacks in subsequent paragraphs. On the one hand, self employment makes people independent. In other words, they don't have to follow others rules and regulations. They have their own ideas and plan for their own company. Moreover, it is an easiest way to earn money quickly because it has not limited monthly salary. For instance, many worker have their limited monthly salary. In the other hand, the drawbacks are it will not guarantee that individual will be successful in future or not. There are many startup have gone loss.

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many
 worker have their limited monthly salary. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
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 hand, the drawbacks are it will not guarantee that individual will be successful in future or not. There are Possible agreement error. The noun startup seems to be countable; consider using: "many startups".many startups
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