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Choices we make every now and then

Choices we make every now and then yLEql
Our life is full of choices. Choosing our actions implies our responsibilities related to the outcomes. When we take responsibility and face the outcomes we get stronger. Along the way, we deeply interconnect with the different kinds of people, including our loved ones. All the time we share our vision with others and embrace others' ideas as well. To preserve the relations in the family it would be better to maintain a constructive dialogue. We should show our respect for their pieces of advice. Meanwhile, we should follow our own goals to live our own lives, if we want to become adults. Our parents, say, wish us better, and they may have a sizable life experience. Don't belittle its meaning. At the same time, some of their judgments may be obsolete. Their opinions on, say, career planning may also be irrelevant. That is why no one can know better than you what is better for you.
Our life is full of choices. Choosing our actions implies our responsibilities related to the outcomes. When we take responsibility and face the outcomes we
get
stronger.

Along the way, we
deeply
interconnect with the
different
kinds of
people
, including our
loved
ones. All the time we share our vision with others and embrace others'
ideas
as well
.

To preserve the relations in the family it would be
better
to maintain a constructive dialogue. We should
show
our respect for their pieces of advice. Meanwhile, we should follow our
own
goals to
live
our
own
lives
, if we want to become adults.

Our parents, say, wish us
better
, and they may have a sizable life experience. Don't belittle its meaning. At the same time,
some
of their judgments may be obsolete. Their opinions on, say, career planning may
also
be irrelevant.

That is
why no one can know
better
than you what is
better
for you.
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IELTS essay Choices we make every now and then

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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