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Write an essay of about 250 words to express your opinion on the following topic. about past and present UAE?

Write an essay of about 250 words to express your opinion on the following topic. about past and present UAE? Nr3wg
United Arab Emirates changed lots from least years. It is growing and became more development country. UAE in the past was a great too the communication was better than now. The changes of UAE effect the people. This essay will discuss the past and present of the amazing country in the world and will draw my personal conclusion. On one hand, the uae changed a lots in last century. Our rulers had their best to develop our country and improve it to be advanced. Now and then it is changed from desert to a green land full of facilities and fun places with good government. However, our country grow much more in different sides such as in economics, tourism and information technology. The economics increased sharply, after a huge changes the tourists have been in uae to discover and explore our culture so that good side of present uae. On the other hand, old generation are more social than now. In the past all families gather with each other in a whole day, but our generation are very busy and they don’t had much time for their families. Now the roles is more necessary than any things, people requires to work hard. To conclude, after a careful analysis the both sides past and present of uae are great.
United Arab Emirates
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changed
lots from
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least
years. It is growing and became more development
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country
. UAE in the
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past
was a great
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too the
communication was better than
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now
. The
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changes
of UAE effect the
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people
. This essay will discuss the
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past
and present of the amazing
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country
in the world and will draw my personal conclusion.

On one hand, the
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uae
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changed
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a lots
in last century. Our rulers had their best to develop our
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country
and
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improve
it to
be advanced
.
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Now
and then it is
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changed
from desert to a green land full of facilities and fun places with
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good
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government
.
However
, our
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country
grow much more in
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different
sides such as in economics, tourism and information technology. The economics increased
sharply
, after a huge
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changes
the tourists have been in
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uae
to discover and explore our culture
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so
that
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side of present
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uae
.

On the other hand
,
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old
generation are more social than
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now
. In the
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past
all families gather with each other in a whole day,
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but
our generation are
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very
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busy and
they don’t had much time for their families.
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Now
the roles is more necessary than any things,
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people
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requires
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to work
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hard
.

To conclude
, after a careful analysis the both sides
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past
and present of
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uae
are great.
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IELTS essay Write an essay of about 250 words to express your opinion on the following topic. about past and present UAE?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
218 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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