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Write an essay for your college magazine entitled ‘My earliest childhood memories’. Describe Your clearest memory and say why you remember

Write an essay for your college magazine entitled ‘My earliest childhood memories’. Describe Your clearest memory and say why you remember 8QyQB
Childhood memories are very important in our lives. It makes us remember the best times of our lives. Today I am writing about my earliest childhood memories in college magazine. I am very hard working and punctual girls. I got up early morning and got ready for school at given time but I arrived before on the given time and my teacher was happy just because of my good habits. Sometime she gave me gifts in front of whole class and my other class fellows were jealousy they fight with me in break time. I was favorite student for all my teachers. One day I made the complaint a student in principle office and he was busy with office works. I took the permission to enter in the office but mistakenly he did not listen and I entered in his office. The principle got angry and he gave me punished me at that time. Seriously still I could not forget that moments. After all, my favorite teacher came in to the office and she explained whole situation to principle and then he forgave me and I was too much nervous and disappointed. Again and again I felt insult but my whole class fellows made jokes. Finally, I came back to my home. I told to my sister and she encouraged me. With passage of the time, I relaxed because it was miss happened form other side and it was not my fault.
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up early morning and
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of my
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habits. Sometime she gave me gifts in front of whole
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and my other
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class
fellows were jealousy they fight with me in break
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time
. I
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was favorite
student for all my teachers. One day I made the complaint a student in
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principle
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office and
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works. I took the permission to enter in the
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mistakenly
he did not listen and I entered in his
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. The principle
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.
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I could not forget that moments.
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, my favorite teacher came in to the
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office and
she
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explained
whole situation to
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principle and
then he forgave
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me and
I was too much nervous and disappointed. Again and again I felt insult
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but
my whole
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class
fellows made jokes.
Finally
, I came back to my home. I
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told
to my sister and she encouraged me. With passage of the
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time
, I relaxed
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because
it was miss happened form other side and it was not my fault.
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IELTS essay Write an essay for your college magazine entitled ‘My earliest childhood memories’. Describe Your clearest memory and say why you remember

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