Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.

Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions. 7aLdn
Teenage is a person aged between thirteen and nineteen years and it is a fundamental and important stage of life that each human being passes through. This term can be complicated. So, the changes that occurred during this term confused not only the teenager’s environment but also the teenager’s head. It is possible to understand how teenagers have difficulties, especially emotionally charged issues. They have many difficulties such as depression and using Alcohol or Substance. Firstly, the depression between teenagers is one of the most serious problems. Common symptoms of depression in teenagers in Turkey, for example, they start getting away from the people around them and lack of interest in everything. According to Some researchers, they blame technology for the rise in mental health problems. For example, spending too much time on electronic devices may be preventing young people from engaging in sports that help ward off depression. Generally, parents find it difficult to admit that there may be a mental illness in the adolescent. Therefore, they may not be able to get professional help promptly. So, parents can turn to for help, it is crucial at this point in a teen's life. Another problem is using alcohol or substance is common among young people in Turkey. Unfortunately, it is a big problem, the foundations of which were laid during the youth period. this problem also leads to the start of other physical and psychological problems. The effect of friends is very important in starting substance use in teenagers. If teenagers do not get attention among their friends; they start imitating what their friends do to be popular or if they want to be accepted in a group of other teenagers. Unfortunately, teenagers think that they feel safe and self-confident in these bad groups. So, parent's support is extremely important in this problem, too. To sum up, there are many problems faced by young people, such as depression and alcohol use in Turkey. In my opinion, parents have an important role in their teenage children to solve these problems. They should pay attention to some symptoms and avoid ignoring them. Because these problems can be prevented if they are treated correctly in time. They should teach to identify the problem to their children and most importantly, they should listen to them. If you can get to the root of the problem in time, you can prevent the problems from growing.
Teenage is a person aged between thirteen and nineteen years and it is a fundamental and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
stage of life that each human being passes through. This term can
be complicated
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
that occurred during this term confused not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenager’s
environment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenager’s
head. It is possible to understand how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenagers
have difficulties,
especially
emotionally
charged issues. They have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
difficulties such as depression and using Alcohol or Substance.

Firstly
, the depression between
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenagers
is one of the most serious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
. Common symptoms of depression in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenagers
in Turkey,
for example
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
getting away from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
around them and lack of interest in everything. According to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
researchers, they blame technology for the rise in mental health
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
.
For example
, spending too much time on electronic devices may be preventing young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
from engaging in sports that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
ward off depression.
Generally
, parents find it difficult to admit that there may be a mental illness in the adolescent.
Therefore
, they may not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
professional
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
promptly
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, parents can turn to for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
, it is crucial at this point in a teen's life.

Another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
is using alcohol or substance is common among young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in Turkey. Unfortunately, it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
, the foundations of which
were laid
during the youth period.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
also
leads to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
of other physical and psychological
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
. The effect of friends is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
in starting substance
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenagers
. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenagers
do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
attention among their friends; they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
imitating what their friends do to be popular or if they want to be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
in a group of other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenagers
. Unfortunately,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teenagers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that they feel safe and self-confident in these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
groups.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, parent's support is
extremely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
, too.

To sum up, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
faced by young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, such as depression and alcohol
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
in Turkey. In my opinion, parents have an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
role in their teenage children to solve these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
. They should pay attention to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
symptoms and avoid ignoring them.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevented
if they
are treated
correctly
in time. They should teach to identify the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
to their children and most
importantly
, they should listen to them. If you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to the root of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
in time, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
from growing.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
401 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts