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Write an email of about 200 words to your boss requesting the course and explaining why you think you should do it

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I am writing to request some more professional training. As I am now negotiating new contracts directly with our clients, and I believe it would be beneficial if I could take this new course to assist me to get a deal more successfully. To my way of thinking, the course is ideal because it focuses on key skills such as recognizing how negotiations might change during the process and reading the emotions of people with whom I am negotiating. It is critical to determine whether the other side is likely to accept our offer. Another area in which I need to improve is my ability to listen properly. I sometimes find it difficult to concentrate on listening, therefore I may not always ask the appropriate questions. One reason for this is that the course also looks at the value of careful planning and preparation so that I may develop successful strategies to use during negotiations. Since the next course is in two weeks’ time, I’d appreciate it if you could confirm as soon as possible if I can take this course as I have to negotiate the new contract with our biggest client next month.

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.

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skills
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people
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improve
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. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 find it difficult to concentrate on listening, therefore
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course
also
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so
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use
 during negotiations.

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course
 is in two weeks’ time, I’d appreciate it if you could confirm as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
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have to
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 month. 