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Dear Sir/Madam, This mail is regarding the recent newspaper clipping, asking suggestions about the subject area of interest, for your new article. I’m a regular reader of your newspaper and I’m glad to share my viewpoints related to this area. Considering this pandemic time, my area of suggestion would be an article related to COVID-19 infection and quarantine practices. Since this is a hot topic, it would be informative and well perceived by the readers. Apart from information about the disease, you can consider a lot of variety of subjects related to it. For example, • How to productively use your time while staying at home • How to engage kids during home quarantine • How to enhance your business at these pandemic times Such topics will grab the attention of many users and enhance your readerships count. Currently I see, there a lot of information going on this matter, which many are illegitimate and fake. The people has now very less trusted source to refer for these information’s. So if your team, can publish authentic information about the same, and burst out all the myth’s, along with above said topics, would be really helpful. Thanks for your time and considerations. Best Regards Sam
Dear Sir/Madam,

This mail is regarding the recent newspaper clipping, asking suggestions about the subject area of interest, for your new article.

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper and I’m glad to share my viewpoints related to this area.

Considering this pandemic time, my area of suggestion would be an article related to COVID-19 infection and quarantine practices. Since this is a hot topic, it would be informative and well perceived by the readers.

Apart from
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information
about the disease, you can consider
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a lot of
variety of subjects related to it.
For example
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• How to
productively
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use
your time while staying at home

• How to engage kids during home quarantine

• How to enhance your business at these pandemic times

Such topics will grab the attention of
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many
users and enhance your readerships count.

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Currently
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see
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a lot of
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information
going on this matter, which
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many
are illegitimate and fake. The
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people
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now
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very
less trusted source to refer for these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information’s
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
if your team, can publish authentic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
about the same, and burst out all the myth’s, along with above said topics, would be
really
helpful.

Thanks for your time and considerations.

Best Regards

Sam

IELTS essay Write an e-mail to the newspaper

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
200 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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