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write about yure father and talking about it

write about yure father and talking about it BY81p

first of all, my father is my role model, due the fact that he is not only to for me. but also my best friend. moreover, He is an ideal person of my life. His name is Mufreh Alanzi, but I always call him dad. He is 49 years old. His hometown is called Hafar Al batin. It is a huge city. He have been living there for about 49 years. He does not like to be late for any task. In addition to suggest me to understand the value of time. My father helps me to study more and more, because he is a teacher. His major is a biology. furthermore, he interested in reading about biology. Although he in love with biology. he is passionate about chemistry and math as well. let's look at his favorite hobby. he really likes football. if he has a chance to play some football and watching football game, he will do that. He also encourages me to move to King Fahd University to pursue that dream.

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first of all
, my father is my role model, due the fact that he is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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 my best friend. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMoreover
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 been living there for about 49 years. He does not like to be late for any task. In addition
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helps
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because
 he is a teacher. His major is a biology. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
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, he interested in reading about biology. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
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love
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he
 is passionate about chemistry and math as well
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let
's look at his favorite hobby. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHe
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really
 likes football. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
 he has a chance to play This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 football and watching football game, he will do that. He also
 encourages me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to King Fahd University to pursue that dream. 