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In my daily life, I have several leisure activities such as cooking, listening to music, watching TV and so on, but I like collecting books and reading them most. In the past, I used to be not keen on reading but now I’m crazy about books. I read books whenever I have leisure time. Reading helps me widen my knowledge and draw many meaningful lessons for myself. Moreover, I always feel relaxed and interested when I read books.
In my daily life, I have several leisure activities such as cooking, listening to music, watching TV and
so
on,
but
I like collecting
books
and reading them most. In the past, I
used
to be not keen on reading
but
now
I’m crazy about
books
. I read
books
whenever I have leisure time. Reading
helps
me widen my knowledge and draw
many
meaningful lessons for myself.
Moreover
, I always feel relaxed and interested when I read
books
.
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IELTS essay Write about your leisure activity.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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