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Some people say that history is important ,other believe that science and technology more important discuss both view

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To commence,
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numerous reason
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pret
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in school
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and foremost reason is that,
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give knowledge about past
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likewise
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augmenting knowledge about how Past
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.
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easy life for everyone
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industralization
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IELTS essay Some people say that history is important, other believe that science and technology more important discuss both view

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4 paragraphs
282 words
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