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Shimla is my favourite tourist destination and it is the capital city of Himachal pradesh. This beautiful city is surrounded by huge mountains and it located at an elevation of 1200 meters above sea level. Shimla is one of the most beautiful places in India. People from all over the world visit this city. It is also known as the summer capital of India. Tourists get many adventurous activities to participate in snow like skiing and surfing. The most famous spot is the Jakhoo hill, from where the entire city can be seen with a 360 degree view. People buy different types of sweaters as it is very famous for it. the landscape of the city is awesome and represents like a step by step construction. The Kalka - shimla railway route is amazing and travelling in train in that route gives breathtaking views. It is recognised as the UNESCO heritage site.

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